Is
it possible
To take pride
In
the accomplishments
Of someone
In
whose creation
And molding
You
took
Absolutely no part?
I wonder...
So
many similarities
Do I see.
I
know that
In a different life,
A
different world,
I
could have pushed
This child
In a swing
Attached
to the branch
Of
a maple tree
And
watched her grow
Somewhat
Like myself,
And
so much
Like the tree
As well.
So
strong!
Always
pushing,
Always
daring
That swing
To take her
Ever higher.
Of course,
The
real world intrudes.
It
always does.
And
she does perform
So admirably in it.
But
still,
She strives
To play her own songs,
And
succeeds!
And
she inspires others
To
find
Their own music
As well.
But
lately,
I
sense a weariness,
And
it disturbs me.
I
sense a fatigue
That
cannot be allowed.
Perhaps
if I'd been there
During
her childhood,
In
reality,
I'd
have the right
To lend a hand now
And
help,
If I could.
For
this voice
Should never be stilled,
Even
momentarily!
Not
from without,
Nor,
God forbid,
From
within.
Never from within.
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Don't
over-analyze this one too much, fellow babies. That can cause more trouble than
it's worth. I oughtta know; I'm famous for doing that!
Thanks
for your time.
Back at your shack, with a verse as well, isn't that swell. Each step is a brick we add in the path too. Who knows who we could and have helped or discouraged in our view.
ReplyDeleteHelp or discourage. It's always easy to do both, innit? We don't always understand the power of our words. (That was my Profound Statement for the day, folks! Haha!)
Deletesmiles...good to see you...and i like the opening question...i think we do take part in molding others with each little touch...i feel for her weariness you sense and hope she finds encouragement...
ReplyDeleteI'll always want to see how high that swing can go.
DeleteJust beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAnd I think like Brian we do take part in molding others and they make the same with us.
You can see my twins I see sometimes have a lot of me and they are adopted how you know.
And in all the relations I think happens the same.
Anyway we learn always of each other or maybe they would be!
Yeah, we can affect even those who are on equal footing with us.
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Janie
Thanks.
DeleteThis is lovely, Silver. One of your best! I hope she reads it and knows it's for her!
ReplyDeleteThanks. Always love comments from my doll.
ReplyDeleteOh crap, Silver...just when I thought I was done crying! Shame on you! I want to know how high that swing goes too.
ReplyDeleteI doubt it has a limit, Natasha.
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